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~Red~
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.

0 posted 1999-12-11 01:05 AM

"13 Screams fill the sparkling Breeze"
There is a pretty boy
who sits in a pretty room
which all the pretty girls
Wish to one day consume
Yet he doesn't see
them dancing around
he just wants to sit alone
after he falls down
he lies to be seen
for that's what he needs
he only wants to be wanted
so he continues his deeds
he sees himself dusty
staring blankly at a broken mirror
but they don't see him
walk on by
they don't hear him
say he wants to die
and as feathers fall from the heavens
they lovingly float freely
to be as pure and precious as a dove
was something he longed dearly
trapped in a peice of glass
so far from sanity
pondering thoughts of suuicide
so close to insanity
he used to sigh perfect
but hes been placed here, so changes can be made
All his Red scars revealed
from abuzing many times a razor blade
Such lives used to contain no flaws
he lives in a world so small
yet selfish and jealous people inhabit it
which lead him to want to end it all

Even though, he sees only one
A pretty one, who no one else sees
An angel to his eyes
Everynite he begs her please
Darling dearest,
Why don't you try and smile
but she looks at him lovingly and shivers
I can't right now, not for a little while
And understanding how it feels to be so blue
he goes and holds her tight
because the love they share is so pure n true
and only they can feel it
many a million would wait for this day
A single Red rose
he placed in her hand
whispered divinity n beyond
into her ear
for once, she smiled merely
and her happiness, which he saw cleary, caused him to shed a tear
just one
and it gracefully disapeered
and the world spun faster
as quickly as it had appeared

there was a pretty boy
who found a pretty girl
since he had nothng better to do
decided to give her a whirl
and he found out
that beneath all his lonely cries
they lie perfected
in a world you could only see, through her eyes.....

~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 1999-12-11 02:06 AM

Wow! Sounds like an incredible relationship born of very trying circumstances. I hope you two continue to find happiness and comfort with each other. Loved the poem.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-11 05:24 PM

My God, I am so sorry I missed you. Welcome to the Dark Forum.
This was wonderful, reminds me of a song in it's layout. Great job. Awaiting more

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

~Red~
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.

3 posted 1999-12-11 08:22 PM

Thank you both, danni n isis for your replies! you see, he's not my boyfriend or anything....just someone i know...i dunno, we were together but i dunno what's going on anymore...but thankyou nonetheless!

~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~

crayon
New Member

since 1999-12-10

Posts 7
singapore

4 posted 1999-12-12 12:48 PM

it's so sweet and sad at the same time...
hope both of you would wok things out ..

~Red~
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.

5 posted 1999-12-12 11:24 PM

thanx crayon...i hope so too

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