Dark Poetry #1 |
Isis |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis asked me to write a poem based on a line that I included in a response to a poem that she wrote. This is that poem. . . thank you Isis for all that you do, you do make a difference, not only to us, but to everyone in your life. . . Daughter of mystery You have walked among us in the dark You have seen the despair of our hearts You have known the pain of lost love But now, you have found the path That leads to the light. You have found your way out of the dark. But yet, you remain with us. Your light a beacon of love In a world where love is lost. Daughter of mystery, Knower of love, Teach us your secrets Show your light to our hearts. Give us the strength to battle the demons. Help us to find our way out of the dark That we may join you in the light To love yet again, To escape this darkest of nights. And to others, be as you are. . . A parent of the light. . .a child of the dark. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
i thought this was so beautiful.im so thankfull for this forum and the people in it.may we all follow in her same light. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven my friend, that was absolutely beautiful, I'm so touched. It means so much to me, I doubt you really have any idea how much. Thanks so much, it's beautiful, and of course I'm gonna print it out!! ((HUGS)) The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very elegant piece Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A wonderful job you did with this challenge, Sven. Michael |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
What an incredible tribute. Isis should be proud to be thought of so highly. Sven , you did a beautiful job on pointing out what she means to this forum and the poets here. I loved it and agree with everything you said of her. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . and thank you most of all Isis. . . you have helped me in more ways than you can imagine. . . and to all of you here. . . sing out! Hide not your pain, for only by singing, can you see the sun again. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You have found a true friend here Sven. She is the sister of my soul. You said it all in this piece. Wonderful tribute! |
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