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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
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0 posted 1999-12-09 12:22 PM



I got blown up
Interesting that
how i stayed down
just got spread around

Something to do
With the rain i expect
I remember it well
twas the day i died
the day all around me
stopped and cried

I was not him
Her she or them
so my passing
did not raise an eye

It was unusual
the way i went
even the news
was shocked it said

But i am not she
or he or them
So i was just forgotten
Again


 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
summer
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa
1 posted 1999-12-09 02:13 PM


i like this kinda dark and abstract...keep up the good work
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