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Forever thee art.. |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
In languid passing.. streaming the darkend halls.. from my chest is passes.. as I learned to fall... down on one knee... begging to at last be free.. then he came to me.. with words of freedom.. chain like words... set to bind my spirit.. to him... His words..prose like they be.. written in the hearts.. of others he bound... like he tried to bind me... his words were like spear points.. to those who sought peace.. they entered easy flesh... His hook dangled before me.. the fisher king laughed as reached for them.. and..I sighed... it would be easy... to allow him to decide for me so easy..to except his peace.. but my soul..though weary.. beat true and strong.. So I took his words... and proved them wrong.. as he lay defeated to me.. he whispered.. 'Would you not like to have the peace I offer to thee?' And sadly I replied' no...I shall find the peace that lies within me' Edward A. Beerman ------------------ For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What a wonderful read with a beautiful twist and the end, me likes  So sorry we never get to catch up any more  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
his words were like spear points....ouch Enjoyed as always Jennifer  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Nice. Liked the ending much. JOY |
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