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Dark Poetry #1

Loves lost

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 1999-12-03 11:01 AM

I was with you
You didn't lose me
my death
Merely a hindrance
to your love
I held you
As you cried
Kissed you
As you lay
by his side
Held your hand
As you became his
Loved you
As you loved
your kids
whispered
In your ears
As he broke your heart
No i am not lost
To you my love
For love conquers
Death and hate
I am with you
Always

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 1999-12-03 11:36 AM

What can I say that would be different? Not much. This is another beautiful poem. This person is lucky to have you with them.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-12-03 12:54 PM

Heart-breaking piece Walter....but I found it quite compelling

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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