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Just another day |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
She hurts me As she leaves Its another day Of hurt of pain She goes and never is seen Just another day alone in my room No love remains deep in her Another day moves As I stand in the rain I am so old Now without her As many days go And I don't see her It's over now Forever Too many days gone And I live no longer ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Sad poem Walter. I felt this before, ya got to keep the faith kiddo! Nothing's over 'till the Man says it's over! Look up and ahead! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Poe-- This poem reminds me of when my boyfriend broke up w/me...it was raining and i just stared up at the sky for help as the rain poured down...i like this one poe, it hit the heart, ouch! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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