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please read!!!--not my own poetry though!
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please read!!!--not my own poetry though! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
*** I've found this poem to be very inspirational***  I do believe the lord above Created you for me to love. He picked you out from all the rest Because he knew I'd love you the best. I once had a heart and it was true, But now it's gone from me to you. Take care of it as I have done For you have two and I have none. If I go to heaven and you're not there, I'll wait for you upon a golden stair. If you're not there by judgement day, I'll know you went the other way. I'll give back my angel wings, My golden heart, My everything To prove to you my love is true- I'd go to hell to be with you ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-06-1999).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
You are right starboards. this was very inspirational. I long for a love like this. But I would hope the one I find this with would choose the right way so that in heaven we both could be. |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
Great poem. A love to die for is one thing, a love to go to hell for, Wow. D.O. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Very moving indeed, ah if only we could be loved this way.. (SIGH)  Thanks for sharing it with us Starboards ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
all I can say is "AMEN" |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
To danni, dreadedone,isis, and eegood: Thanks, I too love this poem...i want to give it too my x but i know it wont do much good...but hey...what can i do, right??? thanks again!!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Love this star. It reminds me a little of the movie, "When Dreams may Come". If you haven't seen it, check it out, I bet you'll love it. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Lostboy: yes i have seen the movie "what dreams may come" and that's exactly how i feel right now...i'm lost searching for the one...thanks lost! starboards ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
This is very good indeed... "To follow a love to hell"; now that is an enduring heart. No offense.... Is this one of yours? Just wondering... I have heard myself say that I would follow a love anywhere, but I never thought it could be into hell. Thanks for sharing. Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Deverone... no...this isnt my poem...i wish it was though!...i found it on the 'net but i thought it fit my feelings perfectly...so i decided to post it... "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Stevia Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28 |
Fits me perfectly too..Thanks for sharing that with us. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hey Starboards, I'm awaiting another poem from you... get to it!!  The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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