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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Twisted, tortued soul, Drowning in doubt, Shaking in fear, Cannot see a way out. Symbolic pain an everyday occurance, A slashed heart takes time to mend, A wounded soul lost to me, All I see a dismal end. An end to the inner beauty, An end to smiles and laughter, Is there truth in the ancient words, Happy Ever After? I doubt it so, And that scares me, Without enough love in my soul, I shall cease to be. I shall wither away, My soul quietly dying, And no one will know, They won't hear it's sighing. Mummified and illegitmate, These feelings I have, Plague ridden soul, Just wants to love again ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- I especially liked the following stanza: My soul quietly dying, And no one will know, They won't hear it's sighing." Keep it up!!! do you need to talk about something?? your poems have had a darkish tone to them...if you need to talk please feel free to write k??? ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Starboards, I'm ok, had a bad morning, wrote the poem, then I felt better. Glad you liked that particular stanza I did too  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
I could feel the pain in your heart and how it wounded my soul. Thanks for the great poetry my friend, feel free to e-mail me, anytime your heart needs mending or just to share stories. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I may take you up on that Jaguar, and thanks ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I believe those ancient words came from Grimm's Fairy Tales . You BTW could never cease to be Jennifer Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 12-03-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What do you mean exactly Jen, I could never cease to be? Could happen anytime!!! Thanks though ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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