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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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You came into my life Helping me through the hard times Giving me a will to go on But once I see the real you You are nothing sort of a jerk You wanted me for only What I had to offer me And you used me love for you As your advantige You have me no more You sad little lies That make me worry about you The things you tell me about your life The guilt you give me I don't care about you anymore That no longer lives with me I never want to see you again |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
..That no longer lives within me.. Loved that line  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Welcome!!! I must echo isis one this one...great line!!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
We are all weak yet you have a buetifuly worded perspective on loves control over our lives Love is tainted, that is all that can be truely said each, person believes differently to its ends but all with the same fears. ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
Welcome Wonderful Poet! I must say, your poem drove a stake through my shattered heart. It reminded me of a guy who told me bittersweet lies of passionate love and all, simply regretting what my friends told me about him. It turned out he was a real creature from Mars, totally a waste of time!. |
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