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Dark Poetry #1

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Jaguar
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

0 posted 1999-12-02 04:12 AM

You have splattered
my walls
with colors
of different hues
searching
where it all began
with one sweep
of your paint.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 1999-12-02 11:12 AM

Wonderful Jaguar. . .

You have scaled a love down to a few words

and showed us all the colors of love

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-12-02 06:46 PM

You have painted a bright beautiful picture with words. Well done Jaguar.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-12-02 07:27 PM

I love poems that are short but speak volumes....well done !

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-02 07:58 PM

So few words, such deep meanings..

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Jaguar
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

5 posted 1999-12-03 05:21 AM

Hello Guys,
Your words really mean a lot to an aspiring poet like me, I'm so happy I could cry out loud right now (kidding!). Thanks for all the kind words.

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