Dark Poetry #1 |
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Seduce me With Pain.... |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
When I said I loved you did you think I was kidding?Every movie, every song, every smile reminds me of you.My intentions were so pure but you just didnt care did you.Ya know I still ache its a little like always being sick.I used to say lets just act like we never met eachother.How did you pull that off without me.Amazing you are.Your punishment you gave, I saw as demented love.The bruises I saw as marks of passion,the ringing of your voice was the volume of your love for me.I now wake up gasping for the same air you would try to take from me,still with a desire to be near you.Do you ever think about it, what you took and what you gave.The Devil was in you my freind.I just didnt know it then.. |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
oh crap i did it again...sorry gang this is supposed to be in dark passion...if its not too much trouble chris could ya scoot it over there for me...sorry everyone ... |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Very intense Summer Lots of emotion Keep it up Good Stuff ------------------ There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Good work Summer. It's a baffling concept how we hold on so tightly to the love for the one that brings nothing but pain. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
pain and pleasure 2 sides of a coin anger and love makes the difference ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Stevia Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28 |
Its a sahme when people act the way they do.I guess holding on to a person like that is really not worth it.Keep your spirits high.There is Better!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Gads, this one holds some deep hurts within. Well done, Summer. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Perhaps the immortal words of Freddie Mercury suit here, 'Pain is so close to Pleasure.' Sometimes we refuse to see the truth and live in fantasy land for a while before we realise... ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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