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Dark Poetry #1

I'm Trying

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-28 04:16 AM

I'm aching
I'm hurting
I'm Loving
I'm trying

I'm waiting
I'm coming
I'm talking
I'm crying

I'm wanting
I'm needing
I'm giving
Not lying

I'm knowing
I'm feeling
I'm showing
I'm sighing

I'm thinking
I'm sitting
I'm laying
I'm flying

I'm helping
I'm understanding
I'm following
I'm "buying"

I'm tripping
I'm slipping
I'm "falling"
I'm dying.

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 1999-11-28 11:12 AM

I'm reading
I'm liking
Nice work!!

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-11-28 11:31 AM

I also enjoyed. Full of emotion and to the point.
Good work.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

3 posted 1999-11-28 09:09 PM

I"m reading
I'm thinking
I'm smiling
I'm liking
I'm loving!!!!
keep it up!!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

4 posted 1999-11-28 09:19 PM

I'm doing a lot of things lately... But with each and every one of you here and and all of us letting that little "part" of ourselves out...

I'm happy
I'm laughing
I'm reading
I'm learning

I'm listening
I'm hearing
and for more
I'm yearning

Thank you

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-11-29 04:37 AM

truly a great piece, Thunder....love the style you wrote this one in.

Michael

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