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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Hear the screams of terror ringing? sounds of death and demons singing? Darkness creeps across the land leading weary by the hand Quiet, as I stop your heart... shortly from life you shall depart Feel the coolness of my blade? slowly stopping "lifes' parade" I hush you as I push it in... fear and pain now to begin Silent agony your only friend caressing your hand untill the end Fear enchants you as you slip away embracing your nightmare, within it you stay Forever you wondered, how would my life end? your "play" is now written, care to attend? ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 11-27-1999).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Very good. Powerful to the extreme When of death is what you speak |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not a play I'd particularly like to see, but great poem nonetheless  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
JOY 14... Thank you kindly  Isis... Probably not one any of us would particularly like to see LOL But, after all, this IS Dark Passions, right? LOL------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
LOL spot on TK ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Definatley an incredibly dark poem, but none the less enthrawling. Well done! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Awesome piece....loved the final stanza. michael |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
danni... Thank you Michael... Thank you |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I echo Michael...Excellently written, my friend. |
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