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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
57 years they said. Oh God its just not fair. I was just a girl then, when you introduced the word Love.Love what is that I said? Oh you mean that dizzy feeling I get when your near. The need to always want to please you. I was just a young girl but you took that from me one painfull night, but that had to have been love.Kissing for hours on end we did just to be that close to one another.Stop making me cry just because you know you can I would tell you. Could I have saved you .I dont think so.You should have never strayed and tried to create a life outside of me,I wanted to help you become a man too. Now bars seperate us for 57 years they say.But you found the light not everyone finds. And thru that light in due time we will meet again. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Summer, so sad.. ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I echo isis...very, very sad...but i didnt really get the whole bars and 47 years thing...its probubly very understandable...i'm just kinda slow  starboards ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very sad indeed  I hope you two each find happiness in whatever it is you can. There is much to be happy about, in whatever situation we ARE in, even though it may not seem like it at the moment... Keep caring, never fear the past, and always look forwards... never "stare" back. |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
oh starboards dont say that your not slow...i have read your stuff...its kinda of abstract poem only i could really know...the poem is about a long lost love...my fist love from when i was 13 years old and he is now in prison for 57 years....so that would explain the bars and the time... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, that you can be thankful in this situation speaks volumes for you. So sad, indeed, but I have no doubt you will meet again, as you have said, Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Oic!! Thanks for clearing that up...How old was he??? I'm so sorry about what happened...But i'm sure that you two will meet again! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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