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Post apocalyptic Anarchy
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Post apocalyptic Anarchy |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Fight till the last Kill till blood runs in rivers Cull the child and kill the mother Anarchy and Dreams Make them burn into the night Now my Brothers Fight Fight FIGHT Wake them all twisted torment Make them see the hammer falling All around the innocent calling make them stop the endless balling Remove their voice cut their tongue but first make sure they can't run And all around the blood will run All around at the end of your guns Everyone will tremble But not the sky or the Earth remember ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! Walter, a very dramatic telling of the 'end of the world'. Is this a prophecy of doom for the beginning of the millennium? I think the horrors of war, as you've described here, are hard to imagine for many of us. It seems that every war is touted as the 'last' war...as you know, the War of the Roses lasted 100 years! And World War I was supposed to be the War that ended all wars.. of course it didn't. Well, you certainly have a flair for imagery and drama..though it's pretty graphic though. I'll read your other work with one eye closed ok?  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
War........too graphic and violent for many tastes, I too shall have to read any more like this with one eye closed..  Could you possibly tone the next one down a bit for little ol' me?? ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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pixon Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10oh. |
Morbid very very morbid, I love it keep up the great work! |
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