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Behind these bars
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Behind these bars They keep my feelings in check I reach out for you Knowing you can't come in My fate was sealed Even before I knew you Spirited soul Mystical soaring roots Adventures sought Pleasures bought Contradiction to expectations Consumed in my own mania Vows for all my life Even before I knew you My word, my bond, my strife Free-falling even now The crime My thoughts for you -RS ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not your crime, their crime Free Bryd  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I simple adore every line of this...it entranced me Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Freebyrd-- Truely it is not a crime to love but to stop love from occuring! I like this...it reminds me of my favorite quote: i'm sorry, it just really reminded me of that quote, great job!!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a CRIME that can be...pennance may never come. Good poem, FB. Michael |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Darkness takes many forms pure animal rage Or loves death told Or loves death hold They all move in amounts unequal to any other poems ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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