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jcsparks Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 13Xenia, Ohio, USA |
Take one newborn, American male, And insert into Today’s world. Add seven years Of parental strife Summing to Divorce at age nine. Divide a house By removing one Natural father, Replacing with Step-father, ex-con. Separate the Broken pieces By 1000 miles. Subtract God. Add the opposite. Take away love And sense of worth. Again, add the Opposite. Multiply By four more Turbulent years And reckon the Outcome: 25 rounds 10 wounded 05 dead 10000 mourners 01 nation stunned The first lesson... ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Regretable maths perhaps?? I can safely say if you keep writing like this, it'll always be chalenging and provoking to the reading. Bravo JC  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
remarkable........i can tell you are "a thinker" and admire that in a person i look foward to more of your work. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, I am stunned. the equation has always been there, but why are we so shocked to see it laid out right before us in undenyable terms. This is AWESOME, jc. I tip my hat to you on this one. Michael |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Flows extremely well. Each part of the equation making it build until. The first lesson... Good Stuff -RS ------------------ There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is OUTSTANDING... I agree with Michael, why is everyone so surprised when you LAY IT OUT before them? Unfortunately, there are thousands more "lessons" waiting to be learned like this one... When will the TEACHERS of lessons like this learn?!?!? ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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