Dark Poetry #1 |
I wonder. |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I wonder if they know just what they did to me, I wonder if they think about the pain they left me with, I wonder if they even have it in their souls, The power to forgive. I forgive them their mistakes, Their selfishness or crime, But still these thoughts do niggle, And perhaps will for all time. I still miss some of them, Long to spend time with them again, But sometimes you can't go back, Some things do come to an end. I will never forget them, They'll always be in my heart, Such special relationships, I know were doomed from the start. I wonder if they know, Sometimes I'm still hurting, Still loving from afar, That they were worth my loving? ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
This poem somehow reminds me of a bruised heart that has been broken almost to the point of utter numbness...i like the idea! keep writing because i'm always willing to read it! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Starboards That I can promise!! ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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BlOoD TiEs Junior Member
since 1999-10-02
Posts 30New York City |
another good one keep up the good work ------------------ Dont bet on fast horses, bet on slow rabits. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks BT ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Loving is so short...forgetting is so long. Well Met jenny |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Tried going back before, it's never worked for me. Terrific piece. -RS |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have to agree with Jenny. . . the wounds can last forever. . . Beautiful words. . . Sven ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks one and all ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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