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Oh, God up above
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Oh, God up above |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
Oh, God up above... is it possible to love a woman that hard... that hard, that deep...it hurts? to feel your heart churn and ache in your bossom, to feel your blood boiling like liquid velvet...? to feel your nerves twitching and pulling, your hands tremble and shake? Oh, God high on high, let me be the beam of sun that greets her morning-smile, let me be the breeze that cools her blusing cheeks... let me be the tear that glistens in her eyes, when I make her cry once more.... I am her food, she feeds my love. I am her wine, she drinks my love. I am her air, she breaths my love. I am her life, she lives my love.... Oh, God, from your seat on high... look down upon this withered soul, grant me the power, grant me the stenght, to take, one day, my one and only belief, my one and only reproof. into my heart, life, my space... into my very own embrace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is beautiful, for one with a 'withered soul' you sure can write a poem!!! Beautiful work with golden dreams  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yes, it's possible to love so much it hurts...Great poem, eegood. Can truly relate to this one. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
It's good to know a male's point of view on love...and yes, like everyone has said...it is possible to love so much that it hurts, but it hurts even more to lett go of someone you love when they no longer love you... ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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