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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
water flows Trees grow all under suns glow People rot Plants in pots reeds in bed strawberry red Natures circle bang your dead ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Why did you chose to end this so soon?? it still leaves me hanging...great poem! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The un-ending circle. I didn't feel I was left hanging...let's you continue it in your imagination  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
image is everything. This has lots of 'em. Cool beans, W! DB ------------------ Motel, money, murder, madness. Let's change the mood from glad to sadness... ===MOJO=== |
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