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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
*I just took a 5 hour bus trip so I wrote lots of poems, in case you are wondering  *Just memorys left behind of what I had loved and of what was once mine Such memories so cold and unkind still haunt me in my sleep and play constantly in my mind But that's all that they are just memories after all a time when my heart opened and then took the fall ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Loved this, but a question, was it a good fall or a bad fall???????  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
extremely BAD fall, isis, extremely bad!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wanna talk hon? Please email me, I'm here if you like??? But Not all your memories are bad?? ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
yes this is true, but what is going on right now it seems as if they are all bad, i explained everything in my email ashley ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Glad you took the bus trip Gives one time to write! Liked this alot. Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
I can definately relate to this.... Those memories you speak of will eventually find a place to be quiet in the back of your mind and the haunting will cease, and be no more....they will stop playing. This hits very close....very nice. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Somethin' about buses, isn't there? If it creates a spark like this, Let's all hop a Greyhound. DB |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Man, those bus trips can do wonders for your poetic endeavors, can't they. I took a bus from L.A. to Washington D.C. earlier this year...and never wrote so much in my life. Great poem, btw. Michael |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
It's a dog of a way to get around. Looks like the free time paid off though. I like this... movin on kinda stuff Yea, I like this. -RS |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Hits close to a lot of us I'd bet. Sorry about your bad fall and hope it's all up from here. Thinking of ya!!! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I would just like everyone to know that, yes i am hurting right now, but this is the way i write my poems, i cant write of good things, because bad things let the words flow right out, do you understand? I know that it seems as if i'm suicidal but i'm not really, i'm actually getting better as the days go on...thanks for your help and support guys, without you i dont know what i would be feeling right now...thanks again! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Starboards, that's what we are here for!!! Battle on my friend, and we'll be right here with you ((HUGS))------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- I've been watching you respond to many poems and i've even read the congrats dedicated too you for becoming a moderator...i would just like to say that too me ur a "mother hen" and that I always feel like I have someone to talk too..i'm glad that you are here, thanks again !!ashley ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Ashley, that is such a lovely thing to say. Mother Hen Isis! I am here for you and anyone else who is interested ANY TIME. So PLEASE feel free to email me anytime. I will ALWAYS respond. Honey you've just made my day!!!  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- well u made my day so i had to make yours...u truely are a wonderful person and i will always look up too you...thanks again! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thank YOU again Starboards, the friendship I welcome, the looking up to part is unnecessary, we're all caring here, each and everyone......... ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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J_Jeter2 New Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 2Longwood Fl, 32779 |
Hey hun you know who it is....I really liked this and you know that when ever you need me I'm here. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
JESSICA!!! your not supposed to read this (she's my friend in class) oh well...see u at school! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Giggles Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 15 |
Hey starboards, seems like we're both going through the same thing right now. (remember "it's not okay"?)I know how much it hurts to fall. I think you were reading MY mind!! E-mail me if you want to share, id be happy to talk, anytime. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks giggles, I think everyone goes through this at one time in their life, but we all will get over it at some point...it will just hurt until we do...i dont really need to talk about it...actually i'm sort of getting over it...but thanks anyway...so glad that i read your mind!! keep writing and i'll keep reading k?? ashley ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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