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Madness (Challenge By DreamEvil) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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MADNESS What sweet music my madness plays, Echoing deep into the night From the shadows with eyes aglaze, My darkest dreams with wings take flight. Echoing deep into the night, The cries will live in infamy. My darkest dreams with wings take flight Feeding on other's misery. The cries will live in infamy, Each voice a treasure in my head. Feeding on other's misery, Collecting the screams of the dead. Each voice a treasure in my head, I cut from each victim their tongue. Collecting the screams of the dead, I drink their blood to keep me young. I cut from each victim their tongue, The power of God within my hand. I drink their blood to keep me young, Heeding Insanity's command. The power of God within my hand, From the shadows with eyes aglaze - Heeding Insanity's command, What sweet music my madness plays. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 08-31-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Hearken unto me and hear my cry. Behold, the Dark is rising! Excellent answer to my challenge. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Umm... yikes.... I'm going to keep my tongue in my mouth so I keep it connected to my body! The Dark is rising indeed! Frightening pantoum... I must say...  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! This was great! Dark, tho' well done! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
oh...um...wow! Certainly an interesting piece! Not what I'm used to, but interesting nonetheless! I'm keeping my tongue to myself too! Yikes!  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I've got an idea....take me with you into one of your dark dreams....so I can hear that sweet music...yes? ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Uh, Ok Femme But only if you brings those candles again. Michael |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow...darkly haunting Pantoum...exellent! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
A well portrayed madness indeed.. Whoa..I am outta here before you start feeding on my body-parts & my miseries..!! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Madness...I am well versed on the subject. Once again your words ring true and haunty. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Ahhh, Now I am reminiscing those sweet days when i sat alone plotting revenge againts people... Now I am not alone.... I have accomplices "It won't give up It wants me dead Godd*mn this noise inside my head" -Trent Reznor- |
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