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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
time is the question, on everybody's mind. afraid of always being late, or maybe left behind. why must we show concern, to the hours of the day. minute by minute step by step, now will pass away. today will be tomorrow, yesterday today. time is always endless, no matter what we say. infinity knows no bounds of time, throughout the universe. we live it in an instant, in rhyme and poem and verse. me. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Great Work! So every truthful, and eloquently put. I felt so very small reading this....but the last lines were so wonderful! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I really enjoyed this Mo  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I really enjoyed this too Mo, it does make many other things seems insignificant. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
It cracks the whip of hurry on the tip of my nose daily, and I'm sick of it. DB |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
This one definatly made me think! Likin' It, Lovin' It! Keep em coming! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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