Dark Poetry #1 |
The knife |
suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
You slowly twist the knife In my back as the poisin seeps through my veins into my head making me in a neurotic fashion comfortable as you end this life before you. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You got me here on this one, it's hard to follow????????? ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Thats what I was going for with this one need me to explain e-mail me but if you think ya understand e-mail anyway ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Tom.....HI.... I like The Knife very much Later Gator Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Nice "twist" to this one. DB ------------------ Motel, money, murder, madness. Let's change the mood from glad to sadness... ===MOJO=== |
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