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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Such torture, she grimaced in pain, It was not physical but emotional, Could he even believe, She was so much more than he could see. Just a stupid housewife, Puttering around all day, Go back to work and you will see, You'll find happiness in your pay. It's NOT about money, It's almost embarrassing to say, I want to be worshipped and thought intelligent, I want someone to really listen each day. I try to share my inner most feelings, They all struggle to understand, If they can even be bothered, If they want to lend a hand. It does disturb me and sometimes it even keeps me awake at night, Wondering if I'll ever feel, Complete, safe and understood, Not alone in an endless plight. A soul to compliment my own, One I could almost call mine, Two souls in love and union, Together for all of time. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
What a falsehood verse two is Isis! Excellent statment on a heart's longing! Jenny  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
are any of us really ever understood. i don't even understand myself sometimes. good luck. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Jenny I know it is wrong!!! Mojar I am beginning to wonder IF anyone can ever really understand your innermost self.. I doubt it, that is why I'm writing.. it bugs me. Mankind is missing out on this somewhere... ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your inner pain shines in this piece, Isis. Very well done. Michael |
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