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Where the old ones walk
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Where the old ones walk |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Great strides these men of ours Scrapeing though the pit death and rebirth returned to the fire Lost in the crypt. The bright trails lost in the stars Among jupiters tail and the mists of mars happy sailing In to the sun Nuclear summers on the run Suns of man in the heavens Ruining gods gardens invadeing his home past into future the old ones search For another perfect home They are lost now The last of the sons Of adam and Eve and the Oldest great one They will find peace In the memory of those Who remain So remember and learn My friends and don't do it again ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So many of us want to learn, but generally speaking, does mankind ever really learn from their mistakes??? Thought provoking, keep it up.  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very profound Walter. I liked this piece much...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
They will find peace in the memory of those who remain..... Right On Walter !! Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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