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Yoin
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29


0 posted 1999-11-17 02:43 PM



a fading
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a heavy sigh drops
another memory
one by one
i relenquish them

i pray you understand
your death.

yoin

© Copyright 1999 Yoin - All Rights Reserved
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-17 03:34 PM


This is great, Y.
Mastering the fear of loss...
But it hurts right now for me
I hope I don't have to express this feeling too soon. I don't think I will be strong enough.

DB

Yoin
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29

2 posted 1999-11-17 03:47 PM


I know what you mean Blue.
It's been a long road for me too.
but it's comforting to know others have driven it before and survived.

Good luck

Yoin

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-17 05:50 PM


A hard road to journey I know, if you need to talk you can always email me. I have a very large sympathetic ear!! Honestly! Lovely piece too

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-11-19 01:59 PM


I love short verse that says so much..
Well Done

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


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