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Dark Poetry #1

Bent On Me

Yoin
Junior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 29

0 posted 1999-11-16 01:54 PM

Bent On Me
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Buckled down and wide eyed,
distant tires sing.
I measure time with their voice.
In this greyness,
I only see me and who I was.
Bitch slapped and strapped,
I am losing my thoughts.

Who are these movements
in a thin crack of light,
faces, names,
bent on me.

Who are these noises
way behind the wall.
Whispers with teeth,
dirty shadows
bent on me.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

1 posted 1999-11-16 02:28 PM

I'm losing my thoughts....

Now that's scary to me.

DB

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The little girl on the plane, who turned her doll's head around to look at me...
------Franny & Zooey------
===J.D. Salinger===

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-11-16 05:32 PM

Good questions, now find the answers!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-17 02:26 AM

Oh, so that's where they went..hehe. Those "dirty shadows" have been bent on me my whole life...excellent depiction.

Michael

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-11-19 01:48 PM

I measure time with my voice...you nailed this one!

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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