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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Loose the arrows of your hate Beat in vain on heaven's gate Live and learn, your love's too late There's way too much upon your plate There is a toll but what's the rate Once you've found your own soul mate Wince in pain, this fickle fate You're true love found, you cannot sate Love's throes dangle like line and bait Thumping heart in body crate Pound the wall with stony pate Only death will part, so you must wait... ------------------ There's someone in my head, But it's not me. ==P. Floyd== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The toll rate? Pain. Good one David  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
once you've found your own soulmate Nailed this one CT Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love the ending David. Got a smile out of me on this otherwise gloomy day...thank you. Michael |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
You're very welcome, Michael. Good journey, CT Thanks, Down Under. Your replies mean a lot. DB ------------------ There's someone in my head, But it's not me. ==P. Floyd== |
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