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Dark Poetry #1

one who can't be loved

lostprincess
New Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 6
dalton ma us

0 posted 1999-11-14 11:36 PM

unpure
i feel no more
i try to cry
but the tears run dry
i lay on the floor
room dark
i live with nothing
but the comfort that
all my days will bring misery
no escape i look for a way out
and it all seems clear now
to feel pain is to know your living
and to live is to suffer
and when hate is the only emotion you know is real
you see the world feeds off the weak

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

1 posted 1999-11-14 11:43 PM

From one of the weak, Nice job!

I enjoyed this, Princess

DB

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And the men who hold high places
Must be the ones who start
To mold a new reality
Closer to the heart.
===RUSH===

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-15 06:48 AM

I too am one of the weak.
I like this much.
Welcome to Passions Princess!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-15 11:17 AM

Very pain filled piece here, L.P., "To live is to suffer", indeed.

Michael

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

4 posted 1999-11-15 11:29 AM

LP, Painful words, but I think you've found something wonderful here.

Enjoyed it immensely.

-RS

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

5 posted 1999-11-15 08:16 PM

Welcome to Passions

I echo Jenny, I too am one of the weak.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-11-15 11:51 PM

I too am weak (SIGH) Welcome to passions by the way!!

Will be looking for more of your work

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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