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sweet rose wine

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-14 05:37 PM

when i see the freshness of the flower,
breaking loose from it's bloom.
leaves and petals unfurling,
bringing brightness to the room.

it makes me think,
of the glory to be.
the color of the rose,
in you i see.

the innocent seduction,
of your fragrance fair.
lingers on the wind,
suspended in the air.

open your petals unto me,
let me drink your sweet wine.
before it's time for you to leave,
let me make you mine.

me.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-14 06:23 PM

Beautiful. Hope your special person listens. I would!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-14 07:19 PM

This took my breath away
Exquisite devotion in this.....so happy to have read it.
In the innnocent seduction,
Of your fragrance fair,
Lingers on the wind
Suspended on the air

Have you ever heard of the vapors?
This gave me a really good case of them

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-14-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-11-14 08:24 PM

This flows very nicely.......and it is very beautiful. Nice job.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-15 10:45 AM

A lovely poem of longing, mojar. Very well done.

michael

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

5 posted 1999-11-17 01:55 PM

thanks, only time will tell. this was a difficult piece to share.

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