Dark Poetry #1 |
Ashes |
Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
Ashes ----- How the dregs of love gather at the bottom of our soul. A residue from the stench of neglect and the festered scars of abuse. Then when the flame has died, when the warmth is only wispy tendrils of smoke that elude our clutching grasp, they are all that is left. Ashes of dreams, ashes of love, gray, cold, dreadful ashes. Yoin [This message has been edited by Yoin (edited 11-15-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Then when the flame has died, when the warmth is only wispy trendils of smoke that elude our clutching grasp, they are all that is left.... Such a wistful read for me... Thanks-for posting this little treasure!! Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-14-1999).] |
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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
Thanks for the reply Jenny. I am glad you liked it. Yoin |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This one is incredible, Yoin. Very gripping. I love this piece. Michael |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Yoin, Absolutly beautiful. T. |
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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
Thank you Michael and Tammy for your kind words about my poem. Yoin |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Yoin, this is sublime! I really love the short ones. Wish I could be so understandable and concise. DB ------------------ The little girl on the plane, who turned her doll's head around to look at me... ------Franny & Zooey------ ===J.D. Salinger=== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Quite visionary Dr. Freud!! Loved this Yoin ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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