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..........Love me not............
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
You love me They love me not When you finally know me comlpetely When I have destroyed you You will love me not And I will be free To pass on into oblivion And you will be free, my love, When you love me not ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
to pass on into oblivion.....I love it when you write short ones like this that say so damn much!!! Jenny  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-14-1999).] |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
This was truly interesting Amy interesting and quite good, well writen ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
I love the short ones, Sys. This is clearly stated and concise. DB ------------------ And the men who hold high places Must be the ones who start To mold a new reality Closer to the heart. ===RUSH=== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll go with DB on this one!! ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very powerful, Sys. "When I have destroyed you"...great line...speaks volumes. michael |
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