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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Don't dare to breath Or live your life, Don't dare to try something new, Don't do anything or it may end it strife. Don't make friends, Don't share common interests, You are boring, You lack self confidence. People will see it And know what you are, People will laugh Quietly from afar. And men they only want one thing? Did you forget? Are you stupid or what? Genuine? Of course not. Don't think you are anything, Don't take what small joys you may find, Cos in the end you shall find, That you are left behind. Don't look forward to anything, You know it'll never happen, Don't spread your wings and try to fly, Don't you know it's all mishappen? Just live in a vacany, Expect nothing and you won't be let down, Exist only in your mind, You are still just a clown. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
The Clown gets it's laughs by what it puts out there. Remove the Don'ts, begin anew and you won't be seen with the clowns big red shoe. My Best wishes for you -RS |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I enjoyed this, but must add you are flying  Love your work!Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Jenny Lee and FreeByrd, I'm trying to fly.. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I wouldn't mind just existing in my own mind right now....clown or not. Good poem, Isis, don't mind me - I'm just venting. Michael |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Expect nothing and you won't be let down. I think I had that personalized on a t-shirt once. It was no way to live then for me and it's no way to live now for this clown. Angry for you! DB ------------------ There's someone in my head, But it's not me. ==P. Floyd== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Michael, of course i don't mind!! Vent away. DB, thanks again ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
I agree with michael, though, I can just imagine the scope of the clown, if it existed in my own mind... EAB |
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