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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-11-12 11:41 PM

I want to crow
to the world
the way that I feel,
to let everyone
know
That she
is perfectly
the one
for me.

From high atop
this balcony,
this height
she
has risen me to,
I survey
and purvey
and try
to decide
who will be
my sacrifice
to her
tonight.

I wish to
spell out my love
with true artistry,
with beauty
and grace
and attention
to detail.
The same suffering
again and again
makes me lose face
and jaded hearts
cry to no
avail.

My spirits are lifted,
my heart
is made gay,
her love
has lifted
my soul,
banishing the gray.
I used to long
for the night,
it’s every delight,
now I long
for the
day.

What can I do
to show my love,
my Darkness
appeals to her.
Hearts and flowers,
I know nothing of,
unless you count
being a butcher.

Compassion
and courtesy
just have
never appealed
to me
you see,
I am more the kind
to play with your mind
and toss
you away
but now I find
she brings out
the best in me.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 11-13-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-12 11:47 PM

Yes, love can bring out the best in a person....but if taken away, love can bring out the worst, too.

Wonderful work.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Bonedaddy
Junior Member

since 1999-11-11

Posts 14
Columbus NJ

2 posted 1999-11-13 01:08 AM

I know how this feeling is...i was there...and sys. is correct in that love can bring out the best but if lost can bring out the worst....but i also think that no matter how bad it seems when that love is lost... if the love is true...then the best will still come of it...like some very wise people once said...always look on the bright side of life...a lost love doesnt have to be lost forever...

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

3 posted 1999-11-13 04:31 AM

To use your words, my friend, this rocks.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-13 04:40 AM

Excellent piece here, Dream, your words well penned - bottled up emotion pours forth from this one.

Michael

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-11-13 07:07 AM

Glorious work here Dream, Ilike very much.

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

6 posted 1999-11-13 04:24 PM

This is really nice DE.

well thought out, well versed

DB

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And the men who hold high places
Must be the ones who start
To mold a new reality
Closer to the heart.
===RUSH===

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