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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Standing stark and bold Against the cold Her arms reach ever skyward Her balance found In frost tipped ground Her clothing cast around her She's beautiful She's magical With Sol's rays streaming through The morning sun When night is done Calls her perfect frame to view I sit with her And dream strange dreams Beneath her twisted limbs Her power and grace Her soaring height Call to mind ancient hymns It's odd this desire I have for her But I've hurt worse from other She loves me still With unchanging will She is my earth-wrought Mother. DB ------------------ "So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past." ----The Great Gatsby---- ==F. Scott Fitzgerald== |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Bravo!!! Love this one DBM  Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Odd, Indeed. But delightful as well in a strange way (for me) anyway. Good Read D.B. Michael |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
I've never heard a tree described so beautifully. Wonderous words  |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Maybe I should have saved this for Arbor Day...or Mother's Day?!?! DB ------------------ "So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past." ----The Great Gatsby---- ==F. Scott Fitzgerald== |
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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
and may you always find a haven in the comfort of her shade. nice work Yoin |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
DB I simply love this one T. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Wow man I must say this has to be one of the best ive ever read for so many reasons. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is simply beautiful. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful musings my friend ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Touch the Earth, Touch the sky And all around Mother Nature smiles ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Thank you all for your kindnesses. DB ------------------ And in the darkest depths of Mordor, I met a girl so fair But Gollum and the Evil One Crept up and slipped away with her. ===Zep=== |
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