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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
STAINED ------- go away i have nothing for you perform your practiced stances of humanity elsewhere i will not act in this pathetic pantomime of gracious generosity go away before i close this distance that you so carefully keep and infect you with my pain before you children learn to play with me go away leave me to my slow inertia Yoin ------------------ |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Go Away... Two words of grace towards those around you, Y. nice work DB ------------------ Tongue-tied and twisted Just an Earthbound misfit... P. Floyd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Enjoyed...good work  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Very good, seems you are afraid of others, afraid for others, and afraid of yourself. Well felt points made. I liked a lot. Off to read more! ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Go away - before I care for you...is what I read in this. Very intriguing piece....I'v been there. Michael |
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