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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
I laugh histerically aloud for the class to hear. They stare upon my red face, so red it scorches. I just laugh only harder seeing theyre gaze fall upon me in bewilderment. Much of the class is made up of idiots who laughed at this kinda thing. The rest well they were frightened, and quite frankly I loved theyre fear. The teacher called for help but I was beyond that. I laughed so as the whole school could hear my ecstatic scream. The hall monitor comes to the room, he looks so placid until his eyes fall unto me. Now im convulsing in a bone shattering manner. Now everyone is frantic and they begin the most facinating panic ive ever seen. The spasms forever increase in violent turbulance. Then the room silences as they all stare at me. All this time as I have looked down from above I never thought anyone would care if i died, I guess that was the biggest mistake I ever made. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Tom, this is nice, and I don't know if this was intended, but the last line has a double meaning........intriguing. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Scary thoughts aren't they? I often wonder if or who would miss me if I died. I 'FEEL' like it wouldn't be many... ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Tom...I love It....you are a super storyteller...damn!!! More please  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
I convulse with shuddering fear at the scene. No one is helping. No one is helping... Wonderful and raw. DB ------------------ September 30, 1659. I, poor, miserable Robinson Crusoe, being shipwrecked, during a dreadful storm in the offing, came ashore on this dismal unfortunate island, which I called "the Island of Despair," all the rest of the ship's company being drowned, and myself almost dead. ----Robinson Crusoe---- ==Daniel DeFoe== |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Well Isis everyone would miss you here thanks everyone and you know part of this story or parts are bassed on truths ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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