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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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He always does everything to extremes, His work, loving, hatred and jealousy, A ticking time bomb ready to implode, And take us all with him to the underworld. Too much of anything is trying, Too much my soul is dying, These extemes unrelenting, His head and soul are lying. Lying to himself and anyone else, Anyone who cares to listen, They coil around me night and day, And as usual it is I who has to pay. Unstimulating, exhausting, twisted, What I need is challenge not medians, It's getting so I fear when the mouth opens, What lies or venom will spill forth? ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
ahh my Sister...I know all too well the words you write here. You cringe when you see that he is about to speak. You know that he hasn't said anything nice, fair or decent to you in ages, this will be no different. Know that I value you and you are better then any of that crap. Always your Soul Sister. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Marilyn, Thanks for your lovely words and I value them so much. You are my soul sister in so many ways. (HUGS)  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
They coil around me night and day. I can relate to all your words . You write so well Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
I can feel the tepid swords that pour forth from his mouth.. Great Poem EAB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Swords dipped in poison even! Thanks Edward ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Words can be so more painful than the fist.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The tongue is man's most dangerous weapon in my book. you realy this thought well. Good job, Isis. Michael |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Hey, I can really relate- this is a wonderful poem. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Damn your good at expressing feelings I loved this one also quite a bit. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks guys!! I appreciate you experts in DP liking my attempts ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Late again, my tongue is tied. I'm enjoying muchly all you have written. Some inspiring and beautiful pieces here, Isis. Please stay with us a while and render us dumb with your work. DB ------------------ September 30, 1659. I, poor, miserable Robinson Crusoe, being shipwrecked, during a dreadful storm in the offing, came ashore on this dismal unfortunate island, which I called "the Island of Despair," all the rest of the ship's company being drowned, and myself almost dead. ----Robinson Crusoe---- ==Daniel DeFoe== |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Sorry, my cpu is stalling. [This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-09-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Deep Blue Me, thanks so much for the vote of confidence. Glad you like what are still experiments for me ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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