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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Who am I to say.. when others decide the decree.. What am I to do.. when forever is bound to stay.. Where is that place, where others cry in vain How shall I remain.. when I have gone away? Knowing of the hate, the hate of change.. seeing my death, the ample remains.. they are that is left.. when I leave.. this word shall be shadows, shadows of a life not lived.. and though, at the time, they seem right could there be another fight , frightning gasp of life.. within these young bones, a old soul seems to grow.. tired of all these trespasses and weary of time.. when all is forgotten.. will it not still remain the same? so I tread ever onward...to that which.. I hate... Edward A. Beerman 11-06-99(my birthday) ------------------ For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Deep thoughts here.Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Bravo great work. Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
One year closer to that which you hate, huh? Have a happy birthday,if you want one. Nice work, Ed. DB ------------------ Right out of the grave they came and made small talk. --"In Honor of Their Daughter"-- ==John Mosher== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Come out of the darkness my friend, and have a happy birthday  Loved this by the way ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very intriguing work. I don't know that I hate the thought of Death, but I hate the thought of growing old..."We die a little more everyday", though, that is kind of a slow death. Nice work. Michael |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Well...I don't fear my own death.. I am like most people, selfish with others... I hate to see my companions....so few true ones, pass from my life.. I am not afraid of death..but, still, the only time I may welcome it will most likly be my own time.. EAB |
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