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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
Untitled He smiles at you with his Chesier snares trying to get to you he knows that if you smile with him you will be him You start to think how inviting he looks he laughs his jesters laugh and thinks to himself How foolish You are to even think of him AND than You stop.... but dont know. ------------------ You onnly have one llife, Think about it |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Do we ever really see a deciever for what hey truly are? Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I ask the same as Watcher..Do we ?? Nice job. Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ouch, very poignant work here. Liked it much. Michael |
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