The night of the rising sun...

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For_Never
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-11-05 02:43 AM

Setting in a cloaking shadow,
a glitter in his eye..
his gaze unwavering
and a window he doth spy..
Encroached in the evening, he make his move..

Wandering those walls, feeling entraped..
her fathers decree chafing her
She need what was denied..
that single crave..calling from beyond..
and as te sun sets, tear fount..
from passion denied eyes..

With the spirit of a knave,
and the heart of a old code knight
he scales though cold stone walls..
with visions of the embracing warmth within..
he steels his heart..
hoping to steal hers..

A scratch at the ceil,
and a breath in a sigh..
she flings the curtains wide
she finds wide eyes to gaze into
to be lost within..
and she to sighs

Eyes met, hearts interweaved..breath in turn
he is lost in her, she lost in him
and in the night, to make one..
and the fires in that great keep..
were tame to compare..
to the fire shared in to lover chest..

He awoke the next morning,
scensing something amiss,
he dashed up the stairwell,
and through the oaken door..
a shout of loss,
and cry of dispair.. he saw note but rumpled sheets..

and the sun tucked the night away...

and the king lost his daughter..
and a Bard gained him muse..
Two lovers merged, forged in their passion
and the scene was portrait...
and the night a frame...
and the gods once again laughed at their creation...

Edward A. Beerman
11-5-98

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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-11-05 07:41 AM

I think this is truly mystical

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

2 posted 1999-11-05 09:05 AM

He is lost in her, she lost in him.

It's a nice goal to have, but oh so rare.

Nice imagery.

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-05 12:10 PM

Loved this.....Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-05 04:02 PM

A perfect ending, I keep reading over the entire last stanza...wow, great job.

michael

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-11-05 11:48 PM

So magical, so beautiful, so mystical (SIGH) I loved it Edward. Thankyou

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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