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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-11-03 09:46 AM


I give you my world
Whole and complete
My time is yours free
I lie at your feet

All you is me
All me is for you
Show me your love
Show me you care

truth is real hard
all here now know
The truth is not me
Its him that you show

Right through me
travel the blood
for you I give up
Only for good

You i leave now
My love is thine
Tell me sweet beauty
Now are you mine?

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-03 11:45 AM


Well Done Mr Poe

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-03 12:00 PM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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