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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
burn me Roast my heart Stole my soul Lost my mind Hold me lover take my hand tell me lies let me understand Oh great belief I am yours now In non release call me yours Treat me bad hold me close take my fear This is love ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Too cool Walter....second stanza got me...  Jenny |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Walking the line between pain and pleasure. I really like this, W!! slomovingvehicle ------------------ Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers." |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Thank you for compliments always happy people appreciate my writeing ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loved the i,magery here.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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