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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Her words surged forth in a riot of spite's venom, Disengorging a vomitous coagulation of stomach-churning hatred mired in a bubbling vat of indignation's bile A steaming, streaming, screaming, seemingly fathomless wave of viscous, clinging oil-fire of hellishly intense wrath that melts the crackling flesh from my word-broken bones And leaves me in a bloody puddle of piss-soaked sub-human pulp And as the putrid loggorhea washes over me in an aural storm-surge that spins what is left of me into a raw sewage filled pit, Surrounded by the discards and floating feces and heroin needles, I think to myself I deserved her words... ------------------ Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers." |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow...I can taste the venom and feel your word broken bones!!  Jenny |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
UMMM WOW! thats about all i can think of to say WOW! ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
OK-IS THIS EVERYONE DESCRIBE AMY'S LIFE NIGHT???? Lol.......seriously, this is another one that hurts to read- oh so true for me.....God....the last line...OHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Seriously, great work! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Thanks for responding JL, sd, and SD! If we don't get it out of us it festers. Here's to getting it all out or cutting off the limb. D.B. ------------------ Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers." |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
This is how I feel right now so I am dredging this up. DB |
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captaincargo Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 109Corning, N.Y. U.S.A. |
O. U. C. H. ! Went right to my stomach. ------------------ Cap. Carg. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Get it out before it festers! Spot on! Such pain when I read this DB  Great job though..------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I share the sentiment D.B. Well done piece, I wonder how I missed it the first time through. michael |
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