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Dark Poetry #1

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Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-10-30 02:22 PM

The end,
that I never thought would be
seems to be coming
closer and closer to me
With pain filled eyes
and an angry frame
My heart bleeds
while whatever is left in me
slowly fades away
Oh but a spark lies within
Carrying me along this dark, empty terrain
Maybe someday,
it'll take me somewhere other than this place

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-10-31 07:58 AM

I love this title, as you have described life as stops along the tracks of life. Excellent Enchantress!!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-03 12:22 PM

Liked this much.Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

3 posted 1999-11-03 04:49 PM

Sometimes the hurt is what carries us along when we can't see why to get up.
Enjoyed greatly!

D.B.

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Mirror, mirror, I confess
I can't escape this, emptiness
No more reason to pretend
Here comes that same old feelin' again
----------------Snowblind
................STYX

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