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The Liar
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The Liar |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
The liar runs on pride and pretends he has siezed life. The liar is lost and pounding on his own soul. He eliminates the turth to find a torn piece of peace. He strives to make it through hard conditions with the lies that are strained from his heart. The liar leads an eccentric life of pain. I am the liar. You are greater than I. I am trampled under your feet of truthfulness. I am a shade of gray from black lies and white peace. I stand as I stand and I can not change. I am a condition of tears. I am the liar who writes these poems of what I want to be. Truthfulness may still be found in this spiraled world. Don't ignore everything you hear and only half of what you see. Maintain my insecure soul and feel my admitance. Bend your ways to invite me in and then you will see how much we resemble ourselves. Maybe everyone is a liar in the end. We grasp our thoughts so tightly that we can't see each others lies. We laugh out our lies, We choke on our lies, and last of all we live through our lies. I am; We are; The Liars |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
GREAT POEM I LOVED IT, SO TRUE IT IS ALSO THAT WE ALL LIVE LIES, BUT EVERYONES LIES ARE DIFFERENT, AND THOSE LIES WE LIVE ARE THE TRUE ENIGMA OF ALL REALITY. Welcome to dark passions hope to see more of your work ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Excellent darkness here,I believe we all lie to ourselves at one time or another and to others more times than naught! Welcome!! Jenny  [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-25-1999).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If we lie so much we start believing, is it not then truth? Great poem. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
" I am the liar who writes these poems of what I want to be'...loved this line! Well done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
I lied to myself for years and it nearly destroyed me. Now it's an occasion not a habit. Write on! D.B. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
How true it is that we lie not only to ourselves but to others. This was a great poem and pretty dead on in truth...about us all...I just wish I could stop lieing to myself as often and start to understand what truth, truely is. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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