Dark Poetry #1 |
Every moment I spent with you |
wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
I do not regret my past, But the pain I endure When I remember Every moment I spent with you. I don't feel sorry For myself or you. Because of what you did to me Every moment I spent with you. Though the good times Creep into my blackened mind The hell I went through feels like Every moment I spent with you. You said, "please forgive me" But could anyone abide by that When you thought of so many others Every moment I spent with you. I cannot forgive I cannot forget, But all I can think about is Every moment I spent with you. So, I left you, said good-bye. You took your ring, broke my heart And left me here alone to think of Every moment I spent with you. It's just so hard to recover When I still smell your hair, Taste your lips, and remember Every moment I spent with you. I'll give myself time I'll try to have fun I'll even try to convince myself I never spent a moment with you. So good bye my love Someday you'll see That we could have been perfect If you didn't cheat on me. ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Garrett......this is the best and most emotional poem I have read. I know the pain you speak of and the memories that walk in your head. My wish for you is that your heart will mend soon and your bitterness will subside for the one who did you WRONG. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent,this tug at my heart strings.Very well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Oh, be calm my heart! Very well done Jenny [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-22-1999).] |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Thank you for your replies! This was so hard to write. The tears swelled up as I typed my heart to sedation. The good words you said make me want to keep trying to write. Thanks again! ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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