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Blue Eyed Wanderer
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 84
Rhode Island, US

0 posted 1999-10-21 05:58 PM

What is wrong with me now?
I'm going crazy again.
All I can think about is
Where I have been.

I thought it was over,
That I'd forgotten my past.
I was doing a good job;
It's caught up with me at last.

I had the perfect outlook.
I WAS doing fine.
But look at me now,
Sanity's not mine.

The pain hasn't stopped coming.
Why has it returned?
No matter when started,
I still feel its burn.

I just can't forget;
But how I wish I could.
Then my life would be better;
It'd be how it should.

I can't stop the hurt
And it's too much to take.
I wish from this nightmare
I'd finally awake.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-10-21 06:11 PM

Blue eyed wanderer, i love this poem! It really relates to what i'm feeling right now...and no...sanity is not mine either! hope to be reading some more of these great poems!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-21 08:18 PM

Great job!I have felt this same way!

Jenny

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

3 posted 1999-10-21 08:23 PM

This is a fantastic poem......I want to let you know I have felt this way before and all that could be done was to hold onto anything that kept me in the here and now......Be strong and your heart will see you through.

If you should need......
all you have to do
is ask and I will reach out
for you, to lend a hand.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---

Blue Eyed Wanderer
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 84
Rhode Island, US

4 posted 1999-10-21 09:59 PM

Thanks for your comments everyone. Deverone--Thanks for the advice too, I'll try to follow it...I'll try.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

5 posted 1999-10-21 10:33 PM

A very good poem, it seems you have stoled thoughts from my mind and caught them on paper.....great work.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

6 posted 1999-10-22 10:11 AM

I've been there.Standing alone in a crowded room.Feeling pain that can't be decribed.Wishing anything would happen to make it stop.This one touched deep.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JD
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 61
N Prov

7 posted 1999-11-06 07:06 PM

Hey Sexy Good Pome I love it but love u more PS I put up aother

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Every thing Dies

DreadedOne
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 51
Odessa, TX

8 posted 1999-11-08 06:55 PM

Life is the dream I often wish I would awaken from myself. Good job.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

9 posted 1999-11-08 06:59 PM

It seems like this poem expresses, how many have felt, so well for I to wish this nightmare im in now would be interupted by my awakening.

GREAT POEM and keep posting

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life is short kill quick

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