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suicidal dreams
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0 posted 1999-10-21 05:38 PM


An enigma wrapped in answers,
a faceless face,
a single bieng yet manny,
a idea of many so different.

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life is short kill quick


[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-21-1999).]

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JennyLee
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1 posted 1999-10-21 05:50 PM


That first line is a world shaker Tom!!!



Jenny

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2 posted 1999-10-21 06:05 PM


Tom, you once called me an enigma wrapped in answers....does that make me a God...or should I say Goddess?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
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3 posted 1999-10-21 06:23 PM


You r definately a goddess Amy.

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Deverone
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4 posted 1999-10-21 08:26 PM


Very nice...."short" and "quick".

Strong words for a question so seemingly small.

Hope you find an answer.....let me know if you do.



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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Martie
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5 posted 1999-10-21 08:39 PM


Sometimes important words don't take alot of room. I think this is one of the sometimes.
suicidal dreams
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6 posted 1999-10-21 10:38 PM


Deverone I was not truly asking a question thepoem was about the many different religions out there and most people are ignorant of the others

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life is short kill quick

Watcher666
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7 posted 1999-10-22 10:22 AM


Well done!Excellent definition.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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